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To make the changes necessary to give Mirim for the WIN a story, I’m going to need to make at least two passes through the story. The first one will focus primarily on addressing the ‘tactical’ level editing issues. The second one will focus on fixing the ‘strategic’ level issues. I may need a third pass to make sure it all fits together correctly. Then it will be back to Sandra.

I’m thinking it will need a new title as well. Mirim will be a major character, but Elisha and Ima and their struggle to get some official support, even if they can’t get official recognition, from the American Commonwealth will be important.

First pass complete for Chapter 1-21, this includes adding more than 10,000 words and two chapters.

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