Tag: Selenite Party Crshers

  • Book 2 With Editor

    Book 2 With Editor

    Artemis Rising is #1,224 in Steampunk Fiction (Kindle Store), #1,368 in Steampunk Fiction, and #3,293 in Alternative History. I got a 3rd customer review, still need a few more to get Audible to take notice – if you’ve finished the book and haven’t left a review, please do so.

    Submitted the new book 2 to Sandra, my editor. It may be a while before she can get to it. She’s a very good (and popular) editor. It’s better for her to have the manuscript and wait to get the time than have the time and be waiting on the manuscript. Hopefully I’ve fixed the issues and we can get this published by the end of the month or early September. Still need a good title for it. I did have another idea: Cutting In at the Presidents’ Ball. What do y’all think?

    Started working on Book 3 which is now Forging the Chain Breakers. Since I was able to pick up a lot that was edited out of either Mirim for the WIN or Antarctic Honeymoon, I’ve made a lot of progress by just touching up chapters picked up from the cutting room floor, so to speak. Chapters 1-21 are essentially the same as chapters written earlier for either Book 3 or some other story. 21 had extensive changes to the final board meeting.

    Chapters this week:
    Preface: Sinister Success
    1: To Business
    2: Gresham Steamship Company
    3: Cotton Exchange and Board of Trade
    4: Financial Setback
    5: Firearms and Electromagnetic Weapons
    6: I Guess Your Budget Is “Yes…”
    7: Tea, Bolivia, and Pilot Training
    8: But First, New York
    9: A Preacher, a Feminist, and a Sorceress Go To Tea…
    10: 15 Union Square West
    11: Breakfast At Tiffany’s
    12: Dinner Plans
    13: Winchester Repeating Arms
    14: Coltsville
    15: Preparing For Dinner
    16: Dinner At Delmonico’s
    17: What’s Next?
    18: Engaging Management
    19: Talk With Browning
    20: Gresham Steamship Board
    21: At This Meeting of the Board… – in progress

    Forging The Chain Breakers word count is 41,143, not counting Dramatis Personae (1,695 words)

  • Party Crashers

    Party Crashers

    Artemis Rising is #993 in Steampunk Fiction (Kindle Store), #1,158 in Steampunk Fiction, and #2,655 in Alternative History. There are still just 2 customer reviews – if you’ve finished the book and haven’t left a review, please do so.

    I’m getting some readers in Kindle, so that is encouraging.

    As I mentioned last week, the rewrite of “Mirim for the WIN” is so major, the book will be getting a new title and cover. I’m currently considering “Selenite Party Crashers”. I plan to send the new version of the manuscript to Sandra for editing by the end of the week.

    The problem with “Mirim” was that there wasn’t enough conflict/setback for the story to be very interesting. In an effort to avoid that problem in the future, I reviewed the plan for the future books with an eye toward what the conflicts/setbacks would be for each story. That changed the focus of the stories some, changed the timeline a lot, and spurred a change in the book titles and order. There are now eight books in the immediate series with “Beware the Wrath of Magi” being added.

    A pleasant side effect of the reorganization was that the planned books aren’t as intertwined. Instead of “Antarctic Honeymoon” being next, “Forging the Chain Breakers” will be next, focusing on military and political preparation for freeing the Moon. Bad news – Plan A will be delayed until at least 1893, maybe much later if the Robber Baron has anything to say about it. Good news – Plan B may have the Moon free by the end of 1891…